I'm glad this platform is engaging you postively. I'm still expecting your try for a four-line of poem. No worries if it sounds simple, I can you improve it (See my reply on the top comment for example)
I'm glad this platform is engaging you positively. I'm still expecting your try for a four-line of poem. No worries if it sounds simple, I can you improve it (See my reply on the top comment for example)
I'm glad this platform is engaging you positively. I'm still expecting your try for a four-line of poem. No worries if it sounds simple, I can you improve it (See my reply on the top comment for example)
Hmm 🤔 Verse 3
I like how the verse 3 reflects about life, how it reflects on the idea that life is short and that we must make the most of the time we have.
Most importantly, I like how it narrows it down to a call for social and political change🥺
Here is my 4 lines poems, I hope y’all like like it;
‘Life is fleeting, time moves fast
Don't let it slip away, make it last
Seize every moment, make it count
before it's gone, and can't be found’.
This is a great poem that hit's the arrow point, and It can yet be transformed for improvement.
Take this for consideration.
"Life is fleeting, time is the ship.
Don't hit the iceberg like a titanic.
Keep sailing with care and surveillance.
Put each moment in a piggy bank"
Seize your moment hmm nice 🧐🤔
Okay I like the end of verse 3 😹 I didn't see that coming 🤣🤣.
My four line poem:
What is life?
Great minds have often wondered.
What is life?
I will leave out the question and just enjoy it's wonder.
Just as expected amazing and mind blowing as always leaving the readers with a great satisfactory feeling of enlightenment,
The third verse is mesmerizing
My lines
What is life
It's like an inescapable question
Some look back at their answers with satisfaction
Some with regret for not taking it serious
And Some look towards it with fear.
Wawuuu....this is awesome
Yes, grandiose is the word.
The sky is a canvas, a work of art
A masterpiece painted by the heart
Of the creator, so grand and free
A beauty that's meant for you and me.
That’s mine
This is great poem. I like it. Well done,
I don't regret readings this at all!
I'm glad this platform is engaging you postively. I'm still expecting your try for a four-line of poem. No worries if it sounds simple, I can you improve it (See my reply on the top comment for example)
I was truly moved by your poem. The imagery and emotion you convey are truly beautiful
I'm glad this platform is engaging you positively. I'm still expecting your try for a four-line of poem. No worries if it sounds simple, I can you improve it (See my reply on the top comment for example)
This is delightful to read.
I'm not a writer but would like to give it a try.
I'm glad this platform is engaging you positively. I'm still expecting your try for a four-line of poem. No worries if it sounds simple, I can you improve it (See my reply on the top comment for example)