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Jan 22, 2023Liked by Tobi Akinpelu

Hmm 🤔 Verse 3

I like how the verse 3 reflects about life, how it reflects on the idea that life is short and that we must make the most of the time we have.

Most importantly, I like how it narrows it down to a call for social and political change🥺

Here is my 4 lines poems, I hope y’all like like it;

‘Life is fleeting, time moves fast

Don't let it slip away, make it last

Seize every moment, make it count

before it's gone, and can't be found’.

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Okay I like the end of verse 3 😹 I didn't see that coming 🤣🤣.

My four line poem:

What is life?

Great minds have often wondered.

What is life?

I will leave out the question and just enjoy it's wonder.

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Jan 23, 2023Liked by Tobi Akinpelu

Just as expected amazing and mind blowing as always leaving the readers with a great satisfactory feeling of enlightenment,

The third verse is mesmerizing

My lines

What is life

It's like an inescapable question

Some look back at their answers with satisfaction

Some with regret for not taking it serious

And Some look towards it with fear.

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Jan 24, 2023Liked by Tobi Akinpelu

Wawuuu....this is awesome

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Jan 23, 2023Liked by Tobi Akinpelu

The sky is a canvas, a work of art

A masterpiece painted by the heart

Of the creator, so grand and free

A beauty that's meant for you and me.

That’s mine

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Jan 22, 2023Liked by Tobi Akinpelu

I don't regret readings this at all!

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Jan 22, 2023Liked by Tobi Akinpelu

I was truly moved by your poem. The imagery and emotion you convey are truly beautiful

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Jan 22, 2023Liked by Tobi Akinpelu

This is delightful to read.

I'm not a writer but would like to give it a try.

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