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Tobiloba's avatar

Hmm 🤔 Verse 3

I like how the verse 3 reflects about life, how it reflects on the idea that life is short and that we must make the most of the time we have.

Most importantly, I like how it narrows it down to a call for social and political change🥺

Here is my 4 lines poems, I hope y’all like like it;

‘Life is fleeting, time moves fast

Don't let it slip away, make it last

Seize every moment, make it count

before it's gone, and can't be found’.

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Franklin Oladipo's avatar

Okay I like the end of verse 3 😹 I didn't see that coming 🤣🤣.

My four line poem:

What is life?

Great minds have often wondered.

What is life?

I will leave out the question and just enjoy it's wonder.

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