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Tobiloba's avatar

I have something new today “Khadosh”... I wouldn't have believed the word has meaning. However, I have a question about verse 2.

How were you able to use the candle and the three roads to represent the balance and unity between the mind, body, and spirit?

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Tobi Akinpelu's avatar

Well, I just wrote, and kept writing, and kept writing.

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Ajewole Allison's avatar

It’s true what they say that like minds align. I wanted to ask this question too because it got me thinking about over and over.

I like it when a writer uses his words to connect with my mind.

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Tobiloba's avatar

Yeah Allison, It got me too😆.

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Isaac O's avatar

Utterly Unique

Love the definition of Khadosh. We are utterly unique. Each with his/ her traits.

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Tobi Akinpelu's avatar

You're enormously correct, Isaac. Each with his/her traits.

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Franklin Oladipo's avatar

I like the last stanza best.

Not because I get it but because I don't understand it and yet it catches my attention. I find myself reading it again and again.

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Tobi Akinpelu's avatar

Hahaha, best upon best!

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