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Tobiloba's avatar

I recently read these beautiful poems and I wanted to share with you what they mean to me. In my interpretation, the first poem “Impassive” by Polina.

After checking the meaning of the word “impassive” and how can it be related to the poem. I concluded that the poem is about finding meaning in everything, even in the small, seemingly minor moments in life. Humans will eventually come to love and appreciate everything in their life.

The second poem “ childhood reflection” by Tobi Akinpelu.

The title says a lot about the poem, and what it means to me is childhood experiences and the difficulty of communicating and being understood when one is a child.

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*By Tobi, titled: Childhood reflection!*

"Can you bring together a manuscript of the wrong,

So that I know all I do will be correct.

Not a question mark."

I didn't have a manuscript of the wrong while growing up. Some things I didn't think were wrong, 'they' said it was wrong and I was disciplined for it. Looking back now, there were better ways 'they' could have handled things, not just using the 'cane'. Unfortunately, three were always in pain.

*By Polina, titled: Impassive!*

I feel this poem is the story of a someone who left home and found it hard to blend in and was not really happy. I had to leave home at some point to look for 'higher things', I wasn't very comfortable in the new environment where I was but as the days went by, a day finally came when I loved everything.

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