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Tobiloba's avatar

Ahh!!!!!

This one really knocks me out I must say. I won't lie when I first saw this, I did not understand any of it. I had to read over and over again to finally grasp what the poem is all about. In fact took me some days

To my best understanding and also from the title LONGING, the poem is all about the idea of human want is unlimited more like human satisfaction. Each time humans achieve a certain level of satisfaction, they are still left wanting more.

Tobi Akinpelu's avatar

This is a giant written summary, and your understanding of it is valid.

The joy of quality content is reading over again, and I’m glad my poem is that content🤓

Ajewole Allison's avatar

Thanks for simplifying this. I wouldn’t say it complex for me to understand

Tobiloba's avatar

You’re welcome. Glad it helps